Well…
Fall, the second book in the Natalie’s Edge series, came out May 15th from Extasy Books and will be up on Amazon in about 10 days. I would love to hear from any of you who read it. I felt like the beginning might be a little slow but of course the last chapter is a killer. I really struggled with that scene. Is it too much? Do you hate Michael? Should I have toned it down? I must admit: That scene was much harsher in its original draft. MUCH. Much to the urging of several editors, I softened it. In fact, that last scene was why some agents declined publishing it. After all is said and done, I’ll share the original version with you…just to hear your opinion. But the truth of the matter is that Michael has some demons. He is far from perfect and his story needs to be told. And THERE IS MORE. And Natalie? Some of you are still mad at her for cheating. Perhaps she needed to get her just desserts? Maybe she is discovering what she truly needs through it all. Sometimes, a little pain can bring about much pleasure. So, please, let me know your thoughts, both good and bad, and tell me your favorite scene! I happen to like the night of the Halloween party. J Redemption is due out at the end of the summer…if I can finally finish it. It’s so hard. Rebecca. The BDSM club. Lots of loose ends. Any ideas? Suggestions? Hopes? Let me know. Happy Reading!
11 Comments
S.D.
5/16/2015 07:43:19
Haven't read it yet, RB. When I do, I'll be back to post.
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Samantha
5/16/2015 10:03:38
I don't see it. When did you say it would be out?
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Leslie
5/17/2015 03:19:53
Half way Rb. Yum.
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R.B.
5/17/2015 23:50:41
Here is the link. You can download to your kindle or you can wait for it to be available at Amazon. But here, you can download any format! :)
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Natalie Webber
5/19/2015 04:52:12
I don't think the last scene was too harsh, although I am intrigued to read the original. Yes, Michael was cruel to Natalie in that scene but he warned her several times that she would be better off going home, but she wanted to stay, knowing he was going to punish her. I think Natalie is just beginning to realise her submissive side then Michael sends her away (sob). It was a very powerful scene and I couldn't help but get swept up in the moment with her.
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R.B.
5/19/2015 14:50:07
Thank you so much, Natalie, for the kind words. I felt it started a little slow and worried.
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S.D.
5/23/2015 02:51:06
OMFG!!
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Samantha
5/29/2015 09:32:01
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. My favorite scene was right before the wedding. And I liked the ending. But when is the next book?
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J.K.
5/30/2015 11:08:24
I actually cried at the end. Poor Michael. I really love him.
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Leslie
5/31/2015 08:34:52
I did NOT think this was slower than the first. I liked learning more about Michael. I liked how he opened up more. Not sure what I should write here! I have questions but don't want to ruin for others. That's why I never write reviews. I will email you. My favorite part was also the last chapter.
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Anonymous
6/25/2015 00:56:15
RB,
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